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Style s idea of a poem (remember sexual frustration?)

Style (Neil Strauss). Posted on Friday, July 3rd, 2009

I found this poem in a book. The title just struck me as so funny, since it’s the Mys *close. Can anyone think of a good way to use it? Is it useful at all? Is it too much? Not sure. My first thought was that the last stanza was too AFC, but then I realized that it’s actually pretty genius, because A. It’s sort of a woman’s frame and B. The last stanza makes you seem shy and nervous and thus counters the effect of how ballsy and seductive you’re being with the poem.

WOULD YOU LIKE TO KISS ME?

If our lips were to meet, would yours touch back? Would your hand reach up to stroke my cheek and neck Or would you simply stand, not moving away but moving in? Would you tangle your fingers in my hair and pull me in for a deeper kiss? Would you feel shock if I slid my hands around your waist and Along your back as you kissed me? If you felt that you wanted to tease my mouth with your tongue would you do it? I will not kiss you first for fear that you would recoil. I’ll hide the nervousness in my stomach as I do every time you walk by and every time I wonder: if our lips were to meet, would yours touch back?

–from Seduction: Tempt, Tease, and Tantalize Your Lover

[new *close bailout: "That wasn't an invitation. It's just the name of a poem. Have you heard it?" LOL...]

love, Marcus Aurelius
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